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This week's word is...
smile

How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

Rules:
- All fandoms, all ships, all writers welcome
- Give a head's up for disturbing/distressing content
- If you share a sentence, please read some left by other writers and drop at least one person a comment. (If you leave the first comment, thanks for starting us off, and please stop back later!)

Date: 2026-01-07 05:43 pm (UTC)
miya_morana: Me (Default)
From: [personal profile] miya_morana
Smiling, Gwaine snatched Arthur’s still half-full cup and brought it up to his lips.

Date: 2026-01-07 06:02 pm (UTC)
stefanyeah: (Default)
From: [personal profile] stefanyeah
Naughty Gwaine. *shakes-head*

Date: 2026-01-07 06:25 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
I would do it, too :)

Date: 2026-01-09 01:24 am (UTC)
blackiceboba: (Default)
From: [personal profile] blackiceboba
Oooh. I have questions! 👀

🐦

Date: 2026-01-07 06:02 pm (UTC)
stefanyeah: (Default)
From: [personal profile] stefanyeah
„Oh, birds,“ Zagreus quipped. He seemed rather proud of his recognition of this particular form of wildlife. Asterius offered a smile. Indeed, he realised, he had never seen any birds in the underworld. The few birds he had seen had got lost in his labyrinth together with the annual sacrifices. Their voices had sounded much more tolerable than those seagulls, however.
Edited Date: 2026-01-07 06:02 pm (UTC)

Re: 🐦

Date: 2026-01-07 06:19 pm (UTC)
wandering_fox: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wandering_fox
I love it when characters get to encounter stuff we take for granted. It always adds a nice detail about their lives and how they think about things.

Re: 🐦

Date: 2026-01-07 06:26 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
It's as if an entire world was described in these few sentences. Well done!

Re: 🐦

Date: 2026-01-07 07:04 pm (UTC)
embraceyourinnerdork: screenshot taken from Mulan 2, Princess Ting-Ting with chopsticks up her nose (Default)
From: [personal profile] embraceyourinnerdork
Love this little bit of worldbuilding! I'd be proud to recognize birds too if my only exposure to them was seagulls!

Date: 2026-01-07 06:04 pm (UTC)
wandering_fox: (Jody)
From: [personal profile] wandering_fox
She smiled that sad thin smile again. --What If #6

Date: 2026-01-07 06:27 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
The word 'again' is disturbing here.
Once is okay, but 'again'? Awww...
From: [personal profile] bens_writingjournal
[Context: in the midst of a horrific nightmare that seemingly has no ending, Doppelganger/Yulia encounters a figure resembling her newfound love.]
=-=
Your breath hitches. She smiles, in the most oddly genuine gentleness you can think of, a smile curving and tucking into the corners of your mouth. And those scars on the bridge of her nose and her left eye… have they always been with her? Nonetheless, you ache upon seeing them — you carved them into her, after all.

You crave to hug her back. To feel her arms again, to feel the warm touch you've been desperately craving ever since your alchemical creation.
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
That explains the What if #6, too!
From: [personal profile] embraceyourinnerdork
Second person POV is always so immediate and intimate, and you use it to great effect here. My heart aches for her.

Date: 2026-01-07 06:24 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
From my Spaceship/Sci-fi ATLA AU

Ozai looks up from the report he was reading, but truth to be told, he doesn’t remember even one word from what he was reading.

Ursa enters his office and she smiles at him. And it’s one of the brightest smiles he’s ever seen on her face. She runs towards him and hugs him with such joy that he’s never expected her to feel.

“I passed the last exam, Ozai! I’ve graduated!”

Date: 2026-01-07 06:36 pm (UTC)
bens_writingjournal: A blob version of Benson Hernandez holds a quill and looks at the text with a smile, while mini-blob versions of his OTP stand beside him (Default)
From: [personal profile] bens_writingjournal
*(applause)* Congrats, Ursa!

Date: 2026-01-07 07:58 pm (UTC)
linky: Minato smiling softly. (Default)
From: [personal profile] linky
Congrats to Ursa!! :D

Date: 2026-01-09 01:25 am (UTC)
blackiceboba: (Default)
From: [personal profile] blackiceboba
Ooh. This is so cute! I thought something bad was about to happen for some reason. 🤣

Date: 2026-01-07 07:01 pm (UTC)
embraceyourinnerdork: screenshot taken from Mulan 2, Princess Ting-Ting with chopsticks up her nose (Default)
From: [personal profile] embraceyourinnerdork
Oh hey, it's the bit right after the excerpt I gave for "worry"!

“Stop that.” Domon cut him off, taking Chibodee's right hand in both of his own. “We're in this together. And if there was a way I could fight this for you, I would.”

Chibodee managed a small, sardonic smile, returning Domon's grip. “I'll remember that.”
Edited Date: 2026-01-07 07:01 pm (UTC)

Date: 2026-01-07 07:05 pm (UTC)
bens_writingjournal: A blob version of Benson Hernandez holds a quill and looks at the text with a smile, while mini-blob versions of his OTP stand beside him (Default)
From: [personal profile] bens_writingjournal
Can I just, uh... comfort these boys?

Date: 2026-01-07 07:24 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
Awww...
Such an intense moment.

Date: 2026-01-07 07:59 pm (UTC)
linky: Minato smiling softly. (Default)
From: [personal profile] linky
I love the intensity here!!

Date: 2026-01-08 04:08 am (UTC)
autumninpluto: Kana squeeing with her face pressed into a pillow ([onk] giddy kana)
From: [personal profile] autumninpluto

Aww, this sounds like such a tender moment :')

Date: 2026-01-07 08:42 pm (UTC)
ashkitty: a redhead and a couple black kitties (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashkitty
He settles himself at the table, trying to not stare more openly than he already is at the flimsy layer covering Wei Ying’s body, at the mess of hair falling over his shoulders.

Wei Ying sits opposite him, chin propped on his hands, with a smile like an explosion. ‘What’s for breakfast?’ he asks, and then dives for the tray to answer his own question.

Date: 2026-01-07 08:47 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
It seems like an interesting morning :)

Date: 2026-01-07 08:55 pm (UTC)
ashkitty: a redhead and a couple black kitties (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashkitty
The morning after a wedding. ;)

Date: 2026-01-09 01:28 am (UTC)
blackiceboba: (Yuuri and Wolfram)
From: [personal profile] blackiceboba
I love the description of Wuxian here. I can picture him so clearly. ♥️

Date: 2026-01-09 05:48 am (UTC)
ashkitty: a redhead and a couple black kitties (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashkitty
Thank you! ❤️

Date: 2026-01-07 10:58 pm (UTC)
chromatic_crow: a picture of a black and grey feathered crow, it's body is facing the left while it's beak is towards the camera (Default)
From: [personal profile] chromatic_crow
rpf warning (but no context lmao)

He couldn’t help but smile as Jonas sat next to him, suddenly feeling like an embarrassingly excited teenager on a double date.

Date: 2026-01-08 04:09 am (UTC)
autumninpluto: Kana squeeing with her face pressed into a pillow ([onk] giddy kana)
From: [personal profile] autumninpluto

That's probably one of the best feelings, tbh! :D

Date: 2026-01-08 04:06 am (UTC)
autumninpluto: Fern reading a book ([frieren] book fern)
From: [personal profile] autumninpluto

From a Fire Emblem: Three Houses wip I started last month and dunno where it's going:

“You’re avoiding the question.”

Sylvain’s lips were curling up in a smile. For the other’s sake, he tried to suppress it, but he couldn’t help it—teasing Felix was so much fun.

Date: 2026-01-08 07:32 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
I see they know each other soooo well! :)

Date: 2026-01-09 09:37 am (UTC)
autumninpluto: Flayn with a pleased expression ([fe3h] happy flayn)
From: [personal profile] autumninpluto

Yes!! They're childhood friends :D