word game: pain

[museaway]

This week's word is...
PAIN

How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

Rules:
- All fandoms, all ships, all writers welcome
- Give a head's up for disturbing/distressing content
- If you share a sentence, please read some left by other writers and drop at least one person a comment. (If you leave the first comment, thanks for starting us off, and we hope you'll pop back around later!)

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Comments

[theemeraldgirl23]

Ooh! This is such an evocative image! The dark alchemy around Spanner's body feeling like electricity and how his body is on fire but he still endures the pain to allow Minato an escape. I imagine Minato caught him as he passed out and stayed there with him instead of running away. Spanner probably wanted to scold Minato for it, but couldn't. Such an interesting dynamic in just a few sentences!

[linky]

Thank you so much!! And you've really nailed their dynamic even without seeing the source material. Though what happens in fic is Minato teleports them away, but he would totally do this too. Its very in character for him. (And Spanner would scold him!)

[theemeraldgirl23]

Cool! I love teleportation as a part of magic systems. I'm also glad I got the dynamic you were going for. Means you're doing a great job!