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From: [personal profile] bens_writingjournal
From my long side story of The Gemini Huntsmen, specifically after Yulia decides to move in to Lara's room following the events of TGH. Though not directly mentioned, the snippet discusses the concept of "drops" in BDSM context.
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"Of course, beloved. You may have missed a few cues from me, but aside from that, you've been a very good warrior," Lara says, to which the clone's shoulders sag at the praise. "At least you deserve a second bathing session with me."

"That's good," she drawls, happily groaning at the feeling of the washing brush carefully scrubbing away the juices between her legs. "Sorry for that sound. Just tired."

"Next time, Yulia, I'd love for your warning before it goes too far, yes?" Beneath the inherent haughtiness of Lara's snarky comment lies a hint of concern and care, a sweet lilt that often makes the clone give a small smile to her. "Though I do get why you're…" She quickly sighs. "…feeling like this: whether from fatigue and pain due to such a rough session, or out of weakness and insecurity, but I think it's a discussion for another day. How about we have some of your favourite raspberry tea and rest, all right?"
Edited Date: 2025-11-06 04:44 am (UTC)