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This week's word is...
PAIN

How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

Rules:
- All fandoms, all ships, all writers welcome
- Give a head's up for disturbing/distressing content
- If you share a sentence, please read some left by other writers and drop at least one person a comment. (If you leave the first comment, thanks for starting us off, and we hope you'll pop back around later!)

A note about interacting: Writers supporting each other is important to me. If you object to leaving comments for another writer, then we are not for you. If you repeatedly ignore this rule, you will lose community membership.

Date: 2025-11-06 02:27 pm (UTC)
belovedstill: (Default)
From: [personal profile] belovedstill
That's so much pain 😭🥺 (I love it asdfghjkl) The fact that the last thought Spanner has before he passes out is that Minato has to escape breaks my heart but also makes part of me sooo sadistically happy. He clearly cares so much...

This is more of a "set phrases in the English language" thing but I really enjoy Spanner feeling like his body is on *fire* and then passing out *cold*. The contracts in words! *chef's kiss*

Date: 2025-11-06 06:32 pm (UTC)
linky: Spanner looking down with a somber smile. (Gotchard: Spanner - Down Smile)
From: [personal profile] linky
Thank you so much Bel!!! ;w; I really appreciate such a thoughtful comment!