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This week's word is...
MONEY

How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

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Date: 2025-11-12 07:35 pm (UTC)
wandering_fox: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wandering_fox
"That is my money and my rep on the line!"

"I don't give a rat's ass about your money and your rep."

"That's it! You want to settle this with pistols? You want to do this?" He struggled his glove off. "Throwing it down, bro! Pistols at dawn! Where you want to go?"

"Right out here," Mark gestured towards the front lawn. "The grass needs fertilizing."

Date: 2025-11-12 07:42 pm (UTC)
theemeraldgirl23: (Default)
From: [personal profile] theemeraldgirl23
haha! "The grass needs fertillizing" gives the perfect amount of levity for this dramatic argument. I wonder who these two characters are. Seems like sports players of some type? They also seem quite close to have this sort of dynamic. Would love to see the actual pistol fight these two are on about. What a fun bit of dialogue!

Date: 2025-11-12 07:55 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
I like when people talk like that - it shows they know each other very well and I always enjoy such dynamics!
Well done!

Date: 2025-11-12 07:58 pm (UTC)
bens_writingjournal: A blob version of Benson Hernandez holds a quill and looks at the text with a smile, while mini-blob versions of his OTP stand beside him (Default)
From: [personal profile] bens_writingjournal
Drama followed by levity - that's what I clearly enjoy! :D

Date: 2025-11-12 10:30 pm (UTC)
anakiddwrites: (Default)
From: [personal profile] anakiddwrites
the last sentence got me like WOW i love the taunting energy here and how it escalates!!!