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This week's word is...
eyes

How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

Rules:
- All fandoms, all ships, all writers welcome
- Give a head's up for disturbing/distressing content
- If you share a sentence, please read some left by other writers and drop at least one person a comment. (If you leave the first comment, thanks for starting us off, and please pop back around later!)

Date: 2026-01-01 12:58 am (UTC)
theemeraldgirl23: (Default)
From: [personal profile] theemeraldgirl23
I love the bantery nature of this little bit of dialogue! Bato being sympathetic of Ursa's experiences, yet not envying her one bit. I think that sort of teenage angst is so universal. You capture that so well in these two lines.

Date: 2026-01-01 06:11 pm (UTC)
nicky_gabriel: Katara and Zuko firebending (Default)
From: [personal profile] nicky_gabriel
Thank you! I like writing about them, but writing teenagers is not easy :)