[personal profile] museaway posting in [community profile] ficwip
This week's word is...
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How to play: Find the word in any WIP and comment with the sentence containing it. Just the one, ideally! The less context, the more hilarious & interesting it can be.

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- All fandoms, all ships, all writers welcome
- Give a head's up for disturbing/distressing content
- If you share a sentence, please read some left by other writers and drop at least one person a comment. (If you leave the first comment, thanks for starting us off, and we hope you'll pop back around later!)

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Date: 2025-10-15 07:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] belovedstill
Fully agree with muse and linky, and I'll add onto it: I love the description of the voice coming out as small and tentative - clearly, he meant to sound more natural, but the nerves got the better of him, the poor guy πŸ₯ΊπŸ€² And! I love that you used the word "beam" - it's perfect here! It carries in itself such soothing warmth, just right for the 'he' in this snippet to feel relaxed thanks to it <3